i personally like where you ended it. for me at least, there was this interesting interplay at the end where i read the "personal" anecdote's reflection on the music and i let myself listen, really listen, to the music and find the same kind of value in it the narrator does. it reminds me of Link's Awakening (my first videogame), and how Marin's Song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EfSOs4ebEuQ) means and evokes a bunch of emotional and conceptual ideas for me but might not for other individuals. In searching for what something meant for someone else ("forcing me to exercise empathy" ?) I found something that meant something to me, and in that slight moment where I wasn't interacting with the game and the music was playing "evoked" in a different ("more deep, human" ?) way than the first line simply evoked on a language-basis. i was moved because i felt like i'd been given entrance into a human's formative thoughts/intimate spaces.